Making Sentences Earn Their Keep

This is a month long craft studio for fiction writers who want stronger prose without losing what makes it theirs. I don’t just edit your draft. I show you what I’m noticing and why it matters. Each week, we look closely at clarity, rhythm, and emotional precision while refining your voice. The goal isn’t perfection. It’s growth.

Includes:

• Weekly feedback on up to 2,000 words
• Detailed written line edits and coaching comments directly in your document, focused on clarity, compression, rhythm, pacing, and scene-level craft
• Deeper coaching commentary and next-step direction via Voxer
• One 30-minute monthly craft session
• 5-day turnaround